My poem, What I Had Forgotten,” was up on The Drabble today. Here is the poem:
Spring came on reluctantly this year—
like the probing of a diffident lover,
uncertain of welcome.
It gave me time to remember
how much the heat of the new sun
felt like a caress
and how the breeze from the south
made me feel like shedding layers—
clothing and skin,
and running wild-hearted
through the first green.
And here is the link:
http://thedrabble.wordpress.com/
Love those last two lines especially! mary
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stevieslaw posted: “My poem, What I Had Forgotten,” was up on The Drabble today. Here is the poem:
Spring came on reluctantly this year— like the probing of a diffident lover, uncertain of welcome. It gave me time to remember how much the heat of the new sun felt lik”
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Thanks Mary. I think the weather wrote this one.
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I know and I love it. I sent notice to the rest of the gang.
Sent from my iPad
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Thanks Sarah. It wrote itself—and then I revised it for two days.
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